Script change

 On the feedback of our sir, we changed our script and did a reshoot after



INT. NEW HOUSE - DAY


*The man, Ammar , pulls up to his new house in his car. He takes out a carton and heads inside.*


INT. LIVING ROOM - CONTINUOUS


*Ammar notices a calendar on the wall. Nonchalantly, he takes it down and throws it outside.*


Ammar

*(smirking)*

Who needs a calendar?


*He grabs another carton and returns inside. Suddenly, he notices the calendar back on the wall.*


Ammar

*(confused)*

Didn't I just...?


*He shakes it off and continues unpacking. However, the calendar reappears on the wall.*


Ammar

*(worried)*

Okay, that's weird.


*Ammar approaches the calendar, but hears a noise from the first-floor corridor.*


Ammar

*(curious)*

What's that?


*He places the calendar on the cartons and heads upstairs.*


INT. UPSTAIRS CORRIDOR - CONTINUOUS


*Ammar walks through a narrow, dark corridor. He opens a door, continues forward, and the door closes by itself.*


Ammar

*(startled)*

Uh, okay...


*He proceeds down the corridor, and as he turns, he sees the calendar attached to the door again.*


Ammar

*(unsettled)*

This is getting really strange.


*The scene ends with an air of mystery and suspense.*

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